Thursday, 6 December 2018

Thursday, 1 November 2018

Monday, 10 September 2018

‘Show not Tell’

Work with a partner to see if you can rewrite one of these  to ‘Show not Tell’
I felt angry. I flung The Door open, chucked My Clothes Around
across The room,
Huffing and puffing as my hands scrunch harder and harder.
It was a sunny day. The sand Scorched by my feet, Bright red face,
Sun burnt, i Squint my eyes.

It was cold at the beach. I was shivering like I
Was In Antarctica I can see my warm breath coming out my mouth
thro the freezing air.   
Brainstorm as many different ideas as you can that show that it was cold at the

Now try to write a paragraph using these ideas that shows it was cold at the beach

, without using the words beach or cold (don't just switch the word cold to another
adjective such as freezing as that is still just telling. - Try to show that you are cold.
Think about how you are feeling/what you are doing/what you see/hear/feel to help
show this.